here is the beginning of a song i just wrote. it's in GP5 and supposed to be a rock/hardcore/metal type of song. any suggestions on how to improve are welcome!
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its doesnt really have the hardcore/metal feel to it,might sound better with drums and stuff.
Cmstar90: i have too lisen to a song for hours just to figure out of one part it sound and how to move my fingers tso that it sounds that way
Cmstar90: when u seem to figure it out in seconds
yeah, needs more things going on. some drums should make it much better.

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