#1
ok so this is new from me, and this is my first attempt at a metal riff like this, its really generic but I always wanted to make a song that sounded like slayer, annd I hope the band and I can make something from this, right now this is just an intro I guess, I dont know where else to go. Crit for Crit leave links.

link in sig.
anybody wanna put anything here just let me know
#5
Holy sh!t i would think its Kerry playing himself ... good job bro...crit mine...in the sig
#6
ahh soz dude i didnt see it first time, its a good riff the harmony is excellent, it needs drums t osound truly heavy like slayer themselves.