So I wrote this a while ago. It's very unfinished, but I wanted to see what you guys thought about it. Enjoy.
This is pretty cool. I really liked the lead guitar, very nice. One of the things I think you need to work on is the rhythym, it sounds a bit messy. Also, during the clean part, don't let every note of the lead ring out, it just makes a bunch of unnecessary noises. Other than that, this is good. Can't wait to here it finished.