#1
Money is the root of all evil,
An artificial god,
Manufacturing greed.
A reality thats fraud,
Making the world bleed.

Our planet is on fire,
F*ck your elite desire,
And your college degrees!
Damn your corporate textbooks!
And screw your PhDs!
Youre a slave to a checkbook,
And you need some THC.

War is the symptom,
Class is the disease,
Screw your death taxes!
I ain't paying your war fees!
Get ya heads outta ya asses!
Im begging you on my knees,
Youre murdering the masses,
With your profitable disease.

Military industrial complex,
Enslaving the world,
With their imperial conquests.

Rearranging our genetics.
Crimes against evolution.
Frankenstein synthetics,
And DNA pollution.

The correctional corporation,
Privatizing crime.
Making profits off desperation,
And people doing time,
For smoking a dime.

Privatizing evolution,
Our genetics have been spliced.
A Frankenstein revolution,
Life has been priced.

Privatizing education,
Dehumanize your mind.
Slaves for the corporation,
No child left behind.
#3
i ABSOLUTLEY LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!! i can totally agree with it seeing as im stuck in the public education system at the moment.
#5
Money is the root of all evil,
An artificial god,
Manufacturing greed.
A reality thats fraud,
Making the world bleed.

Not bad, first line is kinda cliche.. I do like the rhyme scheme you've got going here though

Our planet is on fire,
F*ck your elite desire,
And your college degrees!
Damn your corporate textbooks!
And screw your PhDs!
Youre a slave to a checkbook,
And you need some THC.

It's ok, not crazy about this one but it fits together..

War is the symptom,
Class is the disease,
Screw your death taxes!
I ain't paying your war fees!
Get ya heads outta ya asses!
Im begging you on my knees,
Youre murdering the masses,
With your profitable disease.

I like the "I ain't paying your war fee's" sounds like something straight out of a rage song. The rest fits together..

Military industrial complex,
Enslaving the world,
With their imperial conquests.

Sounds again like something out of a rage song, it's fine..

Rearranging our genetics.
Crimes against evolution.
Frankenstein synthetics,
And DNA pollution.

It's decent, it works.

The correctional corporation,
Privatizing crime.
Making profits off desperation,
And people doing time,
For smoking a dime.

Pretty good, nothing against this one really

Privatizing evolution,
Our genetics have been spliced.
A Frankenstein revolution,
Life has been priced.

It's ok... nothing to say about it really..

Privatizing education,
Dehumanize your mind.
Slaves for the corporation,
No child left behind.

I like this one.. the "no child left behind" act is a joke...

Overall I thought it was good for the most part... I'm assuming based on the content and flow of the song and your avatar that it is written as a RATM type song. It fits that nicely, and lacks the repetition that most rage songs are full of (which isn't a bad thing either way)... keep up the good work...
#6
I love this song!!! I love the rhyme although parts are a bit cliche "money is the root of all evil" it's completely true and deserves to be written down in as many forms as possible.
Youre murdering the masses,
With your profitable disease.
Those lines there are amazing I couldn't have thought that up. Good job.
ferret.
#7
I have to give this a perfect 10, I enjoyed it a lot, and the amout of emotion put behind the words seem to jump out of the monitor and right to music in my head.

Perfect job.. Keep it up.
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