Im a total lyrical newb, but I figure you gotta start somewhere hey?

If you could picture yourself
Drifting with me
If you could let yourself slip
Just enough to see
We could go sink a boat or crash a plane
I know it'd be good and relieve some pain

Sitting in a raft on a river sinking slowely
Thinking of times you'd still want to hold me
I know it wont be easy
It's gunna be tough
But if you'd just dare to see me
I know it'd be enough

It probably wont make sense yet
But I just wanted to let
Go of some things
And when this is done I'll have something to sing

I know it's kinda sucky and short, without a designated chorus or anything but.. I just wanna know what you guys think of the actual words
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Way to go, guitar_man_guy!

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