#1
please dont leave me im sorry i did your dog, i thought it was you, the drugs made such a fog, i know what i did was stupid but ive been hit by cupid so please dont leave me, i sorry i did your sister, she was in your room and i just kissed her, MR. Love sure must hate me.. please dont leave im not in love with you dog, your sister says shes sorry for being a hog, (guitar solo) Im sorry im sorry i wont do drugs, they make me stupid and i dont think you dog likes me any moooooooooore........(insturmental break) PLEASE DONT LEAVE ME I wont have sex with your dog again, and i really have gotten thin, im not that fat druggie any more, and i wont draw naked monkeys on your door.........(drum solo kinda sorta ) fine you can leave me, i figured out im gay, your stupid hoe sister gave me aids anyway............


this wasnt supposed to be one of our bands better songs, just one to make us laugh, btw i dont do drugs, but my last name is stone, and every one calls me stoner
#2
It actually has potential to be a really good song. It's just the line after the little drum solo thing that messes with that.
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#4
that sucks

just don't force it and maybe a good guitar part will come to you later on
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Johnson acoustic electric
Schecter Damien 6
Gibson Faded Flying V
Big Muff, Crybaby 535Q, Metal Muff, Phase 90, Boss Equalizer, Boss Tuner
Fender Hotrod Deluxe
#8
Quote by luckygnome19
It actually has potential to be a really good song. It's just the line after the little drum solo thing that messes with that.


i agree ^
#9
lol nice song man it made me laugh for hours.

my opinion is this good go platinum! nice song
#10
Haha. This could actually end up being really funny. The only thing I would say is add some more things instead of jsut continuing to talk about the sister and the dog.
#11
i may work on this song, honestly, im just trying to get our band together, we have a guitarist, however the only drummer we could get is "going to take drums" so its hard, im really trying to get things together......so im trying to write songs to get a good start