#1
Metallic Coven

Cold gripping at your veins
The one they call Grim now at the reins
Eyes siphoning out tears of gold and silver
Waiting for this cyclone of wrath and spite to be over

Chiseling words of pestilence into their minds
Before their last breath seeps out
The happiness they try to find
Halted by the opening of your mouth

Bodies mounted on the ground
A day of searching with only one thing found?

(Chorus)
A scavenger hunt that puts all to the test
The ceaseless quest to find either life or death
With the search of life over and done with
There is only one thing left

Decimate all that is beloved
Leave this banal mess of society
With nothing but their useless coven

(Chorus)
A scavenger hunt that puts all to the test
The ceaseless quest to find either life or death
With the search of life over and done with
There is only one thing left

One thing left [x4]

Stupefy the public
With the metal that shall rule
Nuts and bolts that seize the day
Countless lives that forever pay

Hypnotize to do your bidding
While the rest of the race continues sitting

Just as I do? [x2]

Taken into your abysmal clutch
Concealed faces I will never touch
As I sigh my final good-byes
I wish for your hopes and dreams to die

(Chorus)
A scavenger hunt that puts all to the test
The ceaseless quest to find either life or death
With the search of life over and done with
There is only one thing left

Laid out upon this mattress of distrust
My eyes fading gray
Thoughts of steel ruling run through my mind in disgust
You shall see the day
#2
After I read this I said to myself, "Wow this looks like something I would write". Anyways, I really enjoyed reading this piece. My favorite line was, "Hypnotize to do your bidding while the rest of the race continues sitting". The entire song was dark and mystical and the flow was just perfect. Keep up the good work, man.

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