#1
yea the name says it all, anyway this is the very rough draft of this song and it has no rythem guitar to it yet. I wanted to see if you all thought it sucked and if so then i'll just scrap the idea. but if i get good response then i'll finish it. Anyway the first part of it is kinda repetetive so listen past that. Productive criticism welcome. thank you for listening.
Attachments:
poppunk.zip
Jeff Loomis

Myspace.com/geneticbydesign
#3
Didn't sound much like pop punk to me, with the whole solo, and then at measures 24-25, that definitely didn't sound like pop punk. Also the chords sound weird on the midi
#5
i have no idea, so is the verdict yay or nay. (i guess it would have to be the palm muted powerchords that make it kind of pop punky i don't know)
Jeff Loomis

Myspace.com/geneticbydesign