yea the name says it all, anyway this is the very rough draft of this song and it has no rythem guitar to it yet. I wanted to see if you all thought it sucked and if so then i'll just scrap the idea. but if i get good response then i'll finish it. Anyway the first part of it is kinda repetetive so listen past that. Productive criticism welcome. thank you for listening.
I like the intro, but the rest wasn't all that great. It was just, i dunno, something i've heard before that i'm not interested in anymore, but keep the intro.
Didn't sound much like pop punk to me, with the whole solo, and then at measures 24-25, that definitely didn't sound like pop punk. Also the chords sound weird on the midi
In what way is that anyway like pop punk?
i have no idea, so is the verdict yay or nay. (i guess it would have to be the palm muted powerchords that make it kind of pop punky i don't know)