#2
Your guitar's slightly out of tune (I'm anal about tuning). Apart from being a little nasal, your voice is good. You definately need to add some variation in the strumming patterns, it gets quite repetative. When the lead comes in, it's a little too high in the mix, so that could do with being turned down slightly. Apart from the things I picked out, it's good! I sometimes read these mini-crits back and feel like I've said a load of negative things even though I liked the piece, this is one of those times
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