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Back from being banned thank you wahappen for only minimaly embarisisng me.

tell me what you think of one of my newer songs. crit for crit.

Underwhelmed


Burning out becomes my state of mind
Searching for part of me I just can?t find
Surrounded by people I don?t really know
2 years of blowing off everything
With nothing to show

After a high comes a low
The world seems magical,
And my thoughts move slow
I wish I could enjoy this,
A feeling I know I love,
Paranoia controls me,
Thought flows from up above

A chilly autumn night is what I really need,
Play my guitar, and smoke some weed
Life would be complete,
All that I really love
Make some beautiful sounds,
And look into the heavens above

All of my sadness suddenly dissipates,
The ground and my body begin to shake
All of my blues seem to fly away,
And I start to live in a world of green

After a high comes a low,
The world seems magical,
And my thoughts move slow,
I wish I could enjoy this,
A feeling I know I love,
Paranoia controls me,
Thought flows from up above

All of my sadness dissipates
And I live with my self
In a world of green

After a high always comes a low,
The world seems magical,
And my thoughts move slow,
I just wish I could enjoy it