i would say its much better man. The bass solo sounds better without all those effects and harmony n an octave lower. Your tone is generally better, and its a bit faster. Nice one
good job, i think i asked this in the other thread but what kinda recording gear are you using?

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It sounded pretty agressive, I liked it. It was different with the much heavier sound, but i like it a lot.