#1
Hi ppl I have made a mini song (1:00 min), I hope you like it. It's moslty based on pentatonics.
Please crit
edit: drums added
Attachments:
mini song.zip
Last edited by Snipy at Sep 1, 2006,
#2
wrong place to put this... i think.. meant to go in original recordings.
#3
Quote by chobbsy
wrong place to put this... i think.. meant to go in original recordings.

This is the right place :p
#4
Quote by chobbsy
wrong place to put this... i think.. meant to go in original recordings.


This is a tab not a recording
#7
Quote by darkfir3
i liked it, the ending sounded sort of rough to me... make it it longer, smooth out the parts, make it longer, and add drums and youve got a pretty good song goin

I added the drums :p
#8
I like it a lot. The dual guitars are really cool (I think there's two, I don't have GP, so I just listened to the midi.) I say make it longer.

I do think the ending could be a little better, but I don't have a problem with it as it is.

Care to crit some of mine? Links are in my sig.
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#9
Quote by aprescott_27
I like it a lot. The dual guitars are really cool (I think there's two, I don't have GP, so I just listened to the midi.) I say make it longer.

I do think the ending could be a little better, but I don't have a problem with it as it is.

Care to crit some of mine? Links are in my sig.

There's: lead guitar, rhythm guitar, bass, drums.
Thanks for the suggestion
#10
sounds ok, you should make a real recording of it though, midi files and stuff rarely sound as good as the real thing. cool ideas though, thanks for the CRIT
Last edited by Rapid_Fire at Sep 2, 2006,
#11
I liked that alot! ...it's definitly not my style of music, but it fills and definitly sounds fun to play! I think you did a great job man, keap at it.
#12
sounds gd
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#13
seems kinda, dry

not enough harmonic movement or anything

and it's really rough and kinda boring aswell.

I kinda think you need to not use only that scale, use some other ones too.