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Hello, I just joined this forum tonight. I have been writing songs since 1998. I have a collection of about 20 songs that I've written or collaborated with a friend. Here is one song that I've gotten a lot of positive feedback on when I used to play open mics more often.

Day of June
by LeahFaith

[Verse 1]
I shouldn?t have gotten in my car
That day of June
I shouldn?t have driven to her house
That day of June

[Verse 2]
Her words uncomfortable
Like she caught onto my act
It?s been eight months
Since I?ve felt relaxed
Ohh? relaxed? (repeat 4X)

[Chorus]
Crestfallen deeper and deeper till
I can?t speak no more and so
I daze and think
She found me out of this haze
And stopped my broken record
My broken record...(repeated 4X)

[Verse 4]
Her time grabbed me by the wrist
That day of June
As her works slapped me in the face
That day of June

[Verse 5]
She said, ?Are you all for the chase?!?
Who cares what people think of you
Just decide what to do
Ohh... What to do... (repeated 4X)

[Chorus]
Crestfallen deeper and deeper till
I can?t speak no more and so
I daze and think
She found me out of this haze
And stopped my broken record
My broken record... (repeated 4X)

[Outro]
She was reaching into my mind
Of how I want to be
She was reaching into my mind
At my favorite thought
My favorite thought of her?