#1
this is a song me and my band wrote today and im not even sure what i think of it so id like some feedback also do u think the title makes any sense? i really like it when u think of it sort of metaphorically but i dunno...


dried and black like the fires of babylon
shrivelled and mutilated once more at the sound of your betrayal
you speak and i believe
why would i question the holy

We united in the hope of unity
but instead your greed tarnished the prosperity of our society
your utopia shall be abolished
we see clearly now, your lies no longer hidden must be destroyed

The lies you speak the fear you reap ended with the irrigation of my mind
The lies you speak the fear you reap ended with the irrigation of my mind

the veil of terror has been lifted from our eyes
no longer do we see leaders but prey
struck down you shall pay
beaten with the same whip you have driven with for so long

The lies you speak the fear you reap ended with the irrigation of my mind
The lies you speak the fear you reap ended with the irrigation of my mind
#2
This is awesome, You're lyricism's really cool, it doesn't so much as conjour up pictures for me, but deffinately gets its message across to whoever it was aimed at (authority of some kind i'm guessing?) Nah i really like it! Keep up the good work!