#1
A bitter End

I sit alone and think to myself
how could i be so blind to the lies
Somehow i can't let go ------------Intro
cant move on
refuse to lose hope
but...

as the days go by the truth comes out
wont suffer any longer
wont feel the guilt
Some things never change
and this world we live in becomes broken
i'll end this now without any words spoken ---------Verse 1
so tear out my heart
remove the feelings
its... all... over

when goodbye became real
who was I to question -------------Pre chorus
i'll move on now
because im.....


Sick of the sorrow
sick of the pain
someone get me out of here -------------Chorus 1
im not to blame
you are....you are......
you put me to shame...


I've lost so many days
so many nights
remembering back to those pointless fights -------------verse 2
Can't get them back even if I tried
so tonight
this is goodbye
because im...

Sick of the sorrow
sick of the pain
someone get me out of here -------------Chorus
im not to blame
you are....you are......
you put me to shame...

Put an end to it all
you wont see me tonight
everything given up
all lost without a fight ---------breakdown1

just...

Put an end to it all
you wont see me tonight
everything given up
all lost without a fight ----------breakdown2 (same as one)
#3
Dude, that's pretty kick ass. I like the word use, and the rhyme scheme even though I'm more of a free verse kind of guy.

Oh, that reminds me. I've just made a song that is really freakin morbid. If you want to go check it out, it's called "My Purpose."
The only ones who see the end of war, are those who die from it