i wrote this not so long ago, just wanted some feedback on it, be as brutally honest as ya want.
Hey, that's not actually too bad =D
"Everybody, one day will die and be forgotten. Act and behave in a way that will make life interesting and fun. Find a passion, form relationships, don't be afraid to get out there and fuck what everyone else thinks."
I think it's really cool!

Kinda low-fi

I liked the repeating eigth note eastern-sounding runs

really cool man, keep it up!
4/4 is just so boring. <_<