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hey, here's a second version of one I posted a while ago, i've changed a few things and also added some. i quite like it, so tell me what you think, any improvements or suggestions would be cool, thanx.

Honey (Don?t Be Crying)

{Verse}
When the morning light
Is shining through the haze,
And I look real hard
But all I see clouds up in grey.
When the telephone
Starts to rattle an' shake,
I try hard to hear
Yet I can only hear the rain

{Pre-chorus}
Though it?s been a lonely time,
I still stand on my own feet
But since I?ve got you
I?ve been living on my knees
Listen up and listen good
Since I got you, and you got me.

{Chorus}
Hey, honey don?t be crying
Don?t hide you face like you can?t hear
They?re not the same old words
When they come from me
Hey, honey don?t be crying
Dry your eyes, I?m always near
Honey don?t be crying
Honey don?t be crying
No need to cry, since you got me.

{Verse}
Are they the starry eyes
Like I could never have
Look up to the sky and
Wonder why it?s all so far
I listen to my heart
And sometimes it?s tough
But I don?t need the world
An it don?t need my love

{Pre-chorus}

{Chorus}

{Solo}


{Bridge}
I?m always near, yet much too far
Still, don?t be crying
Or coming home, with a heavy heart
Honey don?t be crying
Cause no-one said that love weren?t hard

{Chorus}

{Verse}
Hard times alone, ain?t no surprise
It?s a bittersweet paradise
A cradle of thorns, it?s been a lifetime
Spent alone in this world of ours
Now it?s high time we were getting out
I?ll be playing along with you
Don?t be crying, I ain?t leaving
I?ve only gone to pay my dues

{Pre-chorus}

{Chorus b}
Hey, honey don?t be crying
Don?t hide you face like you can?t hear
Hey, honey don?t be crying
?Cause they?re not the same old words
when they?re coming from me
Hey, honey don?t be crying
I?ve always ways been so quick to please
Hey, honey don?t be crying
No need to cry, since you got me.

I?m always near, yet much too far
No use in crying now
Or coming home, with a heavy heart
Honey don?t be crying
Cause no-one said that love weren?t hard

{Chorus c}
Hey, honey don?t be crying
Dry your eyes of all the tears
It don?t take just any girl
To get me quick to please

Hey, honey don?t be crying
Hey, honey don?t be crying

No need to be crying
Since I got you, now you got me