hey everyone. i recorded a song that i would really appriciate some comments on. It's kinda a Progressive Metal/Alternative song, just listen to it till the end. it's the first time i'ev tryed recording anything with drums so if u think they suck, i do to. anyways i'd appriciate any suggestions.

www.myspace.com/forgetnottheroots (the second song called Fawn in the Shadow of Jersey Dream, Cry Nightmare)