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alright I posted this before, I changed the lyrics up and the singing I guess, the singing still sucks, but this is another song that I plan on showing my band, just leave me some feed back and I will crit any of your songs. thanks in advanced.

I was gonna post the lyrics but I just wanna get your straight reactions, with out reading the words.

link in sig.
anybody wanna put anything here just let me know