#1
I pretty much wrote this little song for all of the other people who waste time thinking about that perfect somone. This song is called Dream Thriving. Please tell me what you think, im open to all forms of criticism. Thank you.

Ver.1
Your eyes, lovely pit falls of blue darkness.
A lightless whirl-pool of misery and agony.
Whirling, writhing, weightless and desolate.
I'm clawing the walls as i quickly descend.

Chorus.
In the distance, your voice is very close - bearing empty lifeless hope.
I thrive on a fantasy.

My heart, won't stop, pumping the the blood of your name, but time flows
by and nothings changed.
As I thrive on this fantasy.

Ver.2
Infested. Like a growing colony of cancer, in the midst of my mind.
I've rejected.
The salvation of truth, that this love, isn't mine.
You can't steal what never existed.
Though I long for the feelings that i havn't even felt yet.


Chorus.
In the distance, your voice is very close - bearing empty lifeless hope.
I thrive on a fantasy.

My heart, won't stop, pumping the the blood of your name, but time flows
by and nothings changed.
As i thrive on this fantasy.


....there it is. let me know what you think. thanks.
Im not sorry that i cant be like the rest of you.....