JimmyPage97
UG Member
Join date: May 2004
408 IQ
#1
So, here's a song i really recently completed in Guitar Pro 5. meant for a 3 person band, and have no idea if vocals should even touch it.

I experiemented with tritones in this one (augmented 4ths), i think i got it to sound pretty decent.

Please feel free to comment in any way you want to, i can take it.

Thanks,
jimmypage97
4/4 is just so boring. <_<
fu man chu
Banned
Join date: Oct 2004
240 IQ
#4
haha wow how much of a tard am i, i thought you said power tabs for whatever reason. so yeah sorry dude my computer wont even open it... i really should get on downloading that
JimmyPage97
UG Member
Join date: May 2004
408 IQ
#5
Dude definatley download guitar pro 5, best guitar/percussion program that is the most user-friendly in my opinion.
4/4 is just so boring. <_<
siddyjain
Mr Coffee
Join date: Mar 2006
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#6
umm..sorry to say but it wasnt catchy at all...but i liked the drums alot, they were very good!
but the guitar was repetitive and the only way to NOT make it sound repetitive (except of course, changing it up and all...) is to add vocals.
Changed signature after 4 years.

Will take some time to make a new one.
JimmyPage97
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Join date: May 2004
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#7
what lyrics could honestly go with tri-tones? lol
4/4 is just so boring. <_<
GuitarManiac09
Registered User
Join date: Mar 2006
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#9
I didnt like it too much, but its not like it was god awful or something. It was....odd at best it just sounds too funky...its probably because a) i didnt like the powerchords you used and b) im sort of a stickler for being neat...so the time signature changes kinda gets on my nerves....but mainly it was the chords you used.
Crit for crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=404106
JimmyPage97
UG Member
Join date: May 2004
408 IQ
#10
Well, my power chords were tritones in most cases.

(e.g. 1 on low e, 2 on low a string)

Could you recommend how to make it more catchy? I really like this tune and you seem to know "catchy" stuff

Thanks man,

jimmypage97
4/4 is just so boring. <_<
mrmo
UG's Viking
Join date: Feb 2006
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#11
Well, there was something about those powerchords that didn't sound right, or maybe I'm just stupid an have no ear for music.
JimmyPage97
UG Member
Join date: May 2004
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#12
anyone with led zeppelin as there comment has an ear for music

lol
4/4 is just so boring. <_<
JimmyPage97
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Join date: May 2004
408 IQ
#13
Anyone else want to listen to this song? i think it's innovative and i would like more opinions on it, i'd crit you song for you if you critted mine, thanks.
4/4 is just so boring. <_<
ouchies
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Join date: Jan 2006
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#14
I liked the second theme and i liked that you changed time signatures a lot, but it was still really repetitive. try to vary the song structure a little bit or add some single note riffs.
Night_Lights
I've been here too long
Join date: Jan 2005
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#16
nice drums, the breakdowns pretty sweet.
Youtube covers

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Weebl
Registered User
Join date: Feb 2004
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#17
sounds pretty cool, reminds me of dillinger a bit with all the dissonance and wierd time signatures but its cool