#1
Okay i wrote this song soo long ago and decied it was no good but i wanted to see other people thought. Its a metal song


Too late, its gone
It'll never come back

I'm on the ground
Life has shattered into pieces
Can't put them back together
Can't put them back together

Sick of this place
I want it all to end
Just pull the plug on me now
just pull the plug on me

Too late, its gone,
itll never come back

Where did i go wrong?
Life has shattered into pieces
I dont deserve all this now
I dont deserve all this

Theres nothing to see
I want it all to end
You better just forget me
You better just forget me

Too late its gone
Itll never come back
#3
I don't know if it's totally worth reworking. It's just kind of ordinary, you know? Like it doesn't have a whole lot of power. But hey, it could work in a sort of blunt way.
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