Good job Howyadoin, your guitar was brilliant, nice tune too.
I can't tell any big mistakes because for me, it was perfect: Good tune, good playing, good timing...

Good work!
well I never heard the original song, though it seems as if I did hear it. But I am liking it man, your guitar tone is pretty sweet man, nothing wrong with the guitar at all. That was pretty sweet man, the guitar was nice. keep at it.
anybody wanna put anything here just let me know
Very good tone on your guitar and very solid playing.
How are you recording your gear?
Because somehow your guitar does sound like it's playing from another room down the hall.
Even though you have a really good tone.
I'm using a Gibson Les Paul, Fender Hot Rod Deluxe, & TS-9 Tubescreamer. To record, I'm using Audacity & a cheap pair of headphones.