#1

e
B
G
D                       070905 
A 7b 7    7b 7    7b 7  050703
E 5b 5    5b 5    5b 5  



and


e
B
G
D       0 3 0 5 0    00000 3 0 5 0 
A  5b             3                3
E
#2
The first one was pretty good, if a little generic. I don't really know what to say to improve it besides be more inventive and jump around a little bit more in the same scale.

On the second one, I think the first note would sound better bending up to five instead of a five bending up to something else. And just like on the first one, maybe mess around more in the scale, like


e
B
G                                2
D       0 3 0 5 0    000 0 3 0 5   3b
A  3b5            3     3            3h5
E


If you could, please critique my song here: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=427184