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Ok guys..I went for a metal tone this time and I think it turned out well. Tell me what you think. Crit 4 Crit as usual


Don't Let Me Inside


The greatest moments,
were left untold,
when she left me,
out to die in the cold,
i was focused on something,
that seemed so close,
i reach to grasp it,
but nobody knows........

If I return,
before its to late,
Dont let me inside,
work tonight to remain safe,(2x)

Solo 1

My evil ways left you corrupted,
and your heart a crimson mess,
with this hipnosis we shall,
become the very best,
try to escape from these chains,
and you won't have to sacrifice,
BECAUSE......

If I return,
before its to late,
Dont let me inside,
work tonight to remain safe,(2x)

Solo 2

If I return,
before its to late,
Dont let me inside,
work tonight to remain safe,(2x)


Ok guys here are some notes...The first verse is sang softly with some lightly distorted power chords behing the vocals. Once you get to the first chorus, it remains heavy chords in Dropped-D tuning. Please Crit..Let me hear your comments good or bad.thanks
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1982 Peavey Falcon
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2007 Youngblood 100w cab
2002 Dean Playmate Bass
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