#1
It's really simple and cliche, but I'm just a little acoustic chick, so... check it out.


The Next Day

Maybe not tomorrow, but the next day
I can clear my mind
maybe not tomorrow, but the next day
I'll leave you behind
because nobody is winning this game

I want to be free of thoughts of you
going nowhere in this search for love
believing that the lies were true
this is the chance you walked out of
but I go back to that diary everyday
and I can't sleep at night because of
thoughts of you

Maybe not tomorrow, but the next day
you'll be by my side
maybe not tomorrow, but the next day
I'll look in your eyes
because you realize what you gave away

I can deny everything I'm feeling
I'll just say that I'm a little mad
In reality, my heart is still healing
of everything I thought I had

Maybe not tomorrow, but the next day...

I want to be free of thoughts of you
going nowhere in this search for love
believing that the lies were true
this is the chance you walked out of
but I go back to that diary everyday
and I can't sleep at night because of
thoughts of you



I'm thinking of cutting out half the chorus and just leaving the first three lines of it.
Do I have to fall asleep
with roses in my hand?
#2
Personally, I think this song is amazing, I wouldn't change anything about it. But what kind of rhythm would you be looking at for it?