this is a song i am writing for a school assignment, its not finished yet but let me know if im on the wright track plz???

maybe im the one to blame
maybe we're all the same
this incosistency
is killing me

i thought i'd never have her
i thought she was just a dream
i thought i'd never have her
But her arms are around me

one look over my shoulder
confirmed my worste fear
Darkness, fades to mist
I just wish you were here

if it stoped hurting
why can't you stop crying?
You don't have to be perfect
You just have to keep trying