kay so here it is, i write these words all the time every night and i really want to wright good songs, i play guitar moderatly well for 3 years and i cant fit my lyrics to my music, I CANT STRUCTURE MY LYRICS, so help me do this one please...

excuse my spelling and grammer cuz im bit dislexic...

"Deep Breath Words

i am a medium of love and hate
internally burnt by your words
that pass through me like a fist
exelled through the barrel of a gun
aimed with full intent to hurt,
cant you settle with I love you?
I cant change, I am but a compound
of all thats wrong with you, I am
oblivious to whats wrong with me,
i'm a huge contradiction so hold
me close and see no evil, hear no evil
fear no evil for i am now your christ
and your saviour, no wait, im just an
egotistic ****eer to your sins, go on,
kill me now with some more of those
firey words till i sulk and push closer
to stand on the shadow on the carpet
were you slept last night,
were you had that dream about all
the times i wasnt there and how you
miss them, do you miss it when i wasnt here?
do you wish i might pass in my sleep every
night after you say good bye with a soft kiss
on these lying lips, do you?? tell me now!
i know this is only paper!
you try telling it that...
i'm sorry...
my medium of love is but only hatred,
forgive these secret holding,
thin blue lines."

Last edited by silentearth at Sep 12, 2006,
please structure that jumble of lyrics^^^^ you will rock if you do...
The Universe in your head... it dosen't appeal to me.