heres a short knick knack of a piano and strings playing a little piece

tell me what you think, thanks
Piano 1.zip
Police were called to a daycare where a three-year-old was resisting a rest.
i thought it was very nice! but i think it could have ended better, try doing that twinkly part at the end four times instead of just once. Do that, add in some different parts, and strech it out and you'll have something awsome!