#1
eventually you gotta face that ole sad music
and accept that settling is being realistic
yea compliments look nice on a headstone
but they dont change a life lived alone

maybe she aint got no honey on her lips
but at least shes someone to kiss
she aint a whole lot there to hold
but squeezing nothing sure gets old

chorus:

but your different than all of us hot plate dancers
yeah your the one with all of the answers
so wont you go on, shed me a little light
one day ill be like you, one day ill be right

your nice words, they mean nothing to me
cause its actions that make a man happy
so till you've been in my lonesome shoes
leave me alone to sing my lonesome blues

repeat chorus:
#2

eventually you gotta face that ole sad music
and accept that settling is being realistic
yea compliments look nice on a headstone
but they dont change a life lived alone
Very strong and I love this stanza alot. Very well written and great flow.

maybe she aint got no honey on her lips
but at least shes someone to kiss
she aint a whole lot there to hold
but squeezing nothing sure gets old
Again I like this stanza, while it may be slightly cliched it still works great.

chorus:

but your different than all of us hot plate dancers
yeah your the one with all of the answers
so wont you go on, shed me a little light
one day ill be like you, one day ill be right
The rhyming seemed alittle forced, but it worked out. I'm not quite sure what a hot plate dancer is though.

your nice words, they mean nothing to me
cause its actions that make a man happy
so till you've been in my lonesome shoes
leave me alone to sing my lonesome blues
Very good ending
repeat chorus:

The song is a very simply one, but it is very well written. I found no flaws minus the chorus seeming alittle forced. It gets a 9/10 from me, kudos and keep up the good work.


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