#1
Hey folks......

just some more material we're thinking of putting in the afore mentioned concept album. Which we arent lame for writing.

Any crits would be appreciated, i was going for like a dark kinda, sad atmosphere.....


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Last edited by Gilmour_Wylde at Sep 7, 2006,
#2
I don't really care for the lead tone, but the cleans are nice. I think its a little slow and tedious after a while, a little more variation would be nice. The melodic theme is there but it's not to solid... sometimes the lead just sounds like noodleing. It just needs some refinements to have more structure and it'd be a solid idea. Crit for crit? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=428933 Thanks.