#1
This is an instrumental I wrote and just fixed up I'll crit for crit
Thanx

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[font="Courier New"]Breaking the Cycle

Acoustic section (X4)			
(X2) 		              (X4)

|------------------------------||--------------------------------||
|------------------------------||---h-----h-------h------p-----p-||
|------------------------------||--5^7---9^11---11^12---9^7---7^5||
|---h-----h-----h------p-----p-||0-----0------0-------0-----0----||
|--3^5---7^9---9^10---7^5---5^3||--------------------------------||
|0-----0-----0------0-----0----||--------------------------------||


Electric Section
Part 1 (X4)
|--------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------|
|--------------------------------------|
|7-7-7--7-7--7-7-7-10-10-10-10--3-3-2-2|
|7-7-7--7-7--7-7-7-10-10-10-10--3-3-2-2|
|5-5-5--5-5--5-5-5--8--8?-8--8-\1-1-0-0|

Part 2 (X4)
|--------------------------------|
|--------------------------------|
|------7-7-7-5-5-5------5-7-8-7-5|
|3-3-3-7-7-7-5-5-5-5-7-8---------|
|3-3-3-5-5-5-3-3-3---------------|
|1-1-1---------------------------|

Part 3 (X2)      (X4)    Fill	     (x2)
|----------------------||----------------------|
|----------------------||----------------------|
|----------------------||----------------------|
|-----------5-7-8-7-5-3||-----------5-7-8-7-5-3|
|8-7-5-8-7-5-----------||8-7-5-8-7-5-----------|
|----------------------||----------------------|
		      PM_____________________


Solo		            Fill(x2)
Lead
1|17\5-3-5-7-5-3------------|------------------------------------|
 |---------------6-5-3------|------------------------------------|
 |---------------------6-5--|--------------7-9?-10-9-7-----------|
 |--------------------------|-------7-9-10------------10-9-7-----|
 |--------------------------|7-9-10-------------------------10-9-|
 |--------------------------|------------------------------------|
 (                       V~~ PM___________   V~ PM_________
 (Rhythm 
 |---------------------------------------------------------------|
 |---------------------------------------------------------------|
 |---------------------------------------6-6-6--6-6--6-6-6--9--9-|
 |7-7-7--7-7--7-7-7-10-10-10-10--3-3-2-2-7-7-7--7-7--7-7-7?10-10-|
 |7-7-7--7-7--7-7-7-10-10-10-10--3-3-2-2-7-7-7--7-7--7-7-7?10-10-|
 |5-5-5--5-5--5-5-5--8--8?-8--8-\1-1-0-0-5-5-5--5-5--5-5-5--8--8-|

	                                   H
2|1/7-9-10-9----------15-14-12------------------|
 |-----------10-9-7-9----------9-11-12-15-14-12-|
 |----------------------------------------------|
 |----------------------------------------------|
 |----------------------------------------------|
 |----------------------------------------------|
 (                                           V~~
 (
 |-----------------------------------------|
 |-----------------------------------------|
 |------7-7-7-5-5-5------5-7-8-7-5---------|
 |3-3-3-7-7-7-5-5-5-5-7-8------------------|
 |3-3-3-5-5-5-3-3-3------------------------|
 |1-1-1---------------------------0--0--0--|

3|---------------------------------------|
 |---------------------------------------|
 |----------------------8-10-11-10-11-10-|
 |--------------8-10-11------------------|
 |-------7-9-10--------------------------|
 |7-9-10---------------------------------| 
 (PM______________		          V~~~
 (PM_____________\	           V~~~
 |------------------------------|
 |------------------------------|
 |------------------------------|
 |------------------------------|
 |----------------------0-2-3-2-|
 |0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-0-2-3---------| 


Clean (X2)
(X3) 	              (X4)
|--------------------||-----------||---------------------||
|--------------------||-----------||---------------------||
|3-3-x-x-7-7-8-8-----||-----------||---------------------|| 
|3-3-x-x-7-7-8-8-7-7-||-----------||---------------------||
|1-1-x-x-5-5-6-6-7-7-||1/5-5---6-6||---------------------||
|----------------5-5-||------0----||0-5-0-5p4-0-3p2-0-2p0||

|-------------------------|
|[12]---------------------|
|----[12]-----------------|X
|--------[12]-[5]---------|4
|-----------------[5]-[7]-|
|-------------------------|[/FONT]
Last edited by punkture_wound at Oct 13, 2006,
#2
what the hell? 80 views and no replys. omfg. i'm getting upset now
Last edited by punkture_wound at Sep 14, 2006,
#4
if i had powertab on my computer i would have a demonstration for u guys

1 is in eigths
the fill in the solo is in sixteenths
2 is in sixteenths but slowed down just a bit and the vibrato is a half note
3 is in sixteenths but slowed down just a bit and the vibrato is a half note

that's how quick the solo is.
#8
my parents are retarded and block all my **** that's why can we stay on subject please the tab?
#9
I'll try making it on guitar pro and uploading a midi... Looks cool though.

EDIT: I have no idea what the tempo is, or if the timing is correct.

here it is. Some parts sound like crap because I think the timing was wrong... But some parts were ok. Oh yeah threadstarter tell me if this is what it's supposed to sound like.
Attachments:
Guys song.zip
Last edited by RedDeath9 at Sep 22, 2006,
#15
It's a bit dull around here so we trawl through the past to entertain ourselves.
My songs are all located here .
Feel free to drop by and crit a song.
Leave a link and I'll return a crit



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