#1
Cant hold on too much longer
The trip is getting much stronger
Under the gun i reside
Got a head full of thoughts
Gonna see what it can hide and

My conscience wasnt quite clear
but the radiance of your voice
brings a note that leaves a tear
and, im stuck on the other side of a gun
but the triggers never pulled
and the war is never won

so, i say
maybe another day
ill be on the other side
and choose who will go or stay
so i sit and wait for the day
but the sun never rises
and the moon wont go away.
#2
I like it. The last stanza's rhyming scheme is very interesting and well done. The second stanza, however, gets my vote as the best. It's very well written. Good job.