hey man i just listened. its wasnt great, but it definatley wasnt bad. i would say try to make it a little less boring. i know its acosutic, but you vould still jazz it up a little. your vox werent too bad at all i thought, fit with the song anyway. 7/10
hey i like the opening to this song and maybe you should work on it a little more instead of just done in 30 minutes... turn up the volume on the vocals but its not bad at all... its pretty decent in my opinion... and i love acoustic stuff so this is one of the better played stuff on dmusic ive heard cheer

crit mine: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=6778655#post6778655