#1
I write fast i guess, every time i write a song it takes less than 10 miniutes.

Oh well.

Who Am I, Anyway?

I have been
A million different people
in my day
A new reputation
for a new location
Who am i today?

He's a different person
She's a different person
Who are we all anyway?
This reputation just won't fit
You don't know me, you don't know me
Who am i, anyway?

It's got a long story behind it, i won't go into it unless you can't figure out what it's about.

I wrote some instrumetals for it, for the finished product, here's the dmusic.

http://tjw.dmusic.com/
#3
I really like this piece, its quick and fairly simplistic, and it gets across the point very well. However Im not quite sure if the lines "A new reputation for a new location" really make sense. I suppose that they do to you though. Sorry Im not much help, but I cant see much on this piece that you actually could improve on. Good writing

Edit: Heres mine
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=430065

Its not quite nearly as good as yours, but ah well.
Yellowknife, Northwest Territories
#4
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