#1
Well there comes a time in every mans life, when he must wake up and finally see.
That everything isn't quite as right, as right as he once wished it would be.
Well everybody around you, they don't give a **** they can't really see.
That this is the only way for me too be true, Cuz thats just it
This is the real me.

Cuz im drinking , fighting
having a good time
without a single care on my mind

Drinking fighting
having a good time
and **** your words this life is mine

Well me and my buds we head down the street, to figure out where it will take me
We head down the block and to the beach, And drink a sixty-six of whiskey.
I Loss my hair and loss my mind, but at least we know where free.
We all don't care and waste are time, But this is just it
This is the real me

Cuz im drinking , fighting
having a good time
without a single care on my mind

Drinking fighting
having a good time
and **** your words this life is mine

And mayby they where right, and I should change.
And mayby get a life, before I age
I wasted my youth, some would say
But I don't care, Cuz for now I'm

drinking , fighting
having a good time
without a single care on my mind

Drinking fighting
having a good time
and **** your words this life is mine

HA HA HA **** you all.......


Yeah i don't know crit for crit if you leave a link.
#4
Nice lyrics. The chorus is excellent. You have a good rhyme scheme and the lyrics flow well. Great message, too. I get the same feeling at times.
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#5
Thanks for the crits
yeah it is sort of a rancid kinda song i guess
leave me a link to crit your songs pls.
#6
I liked it! Think the chourus is great & the verses are pretty good too. Good topic for a song too I think, something that lots of poeple can relate too.
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#7
hahahahahahahahahahaa awesum!!!!! i can hear a banjo and cledius from the simpsons singing it!!!!!! *i cant spell his name*