#1
Hey every1. I got mad at my Step-Dad today and i ended up writin this song. tell me how u like it.

You Better F*****g Go Away
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hey little b***h what are you doing here
i thought i told you to stay away from me
well you had better do as i say
because i'm not going to put with any s**t

you broke me down
and you bled me
to the point of anger

you better f*****g go away
while you're still alive
you better f*****g go away
while you still have a chance

f**k you f**k you
f**k you f**k you

what the f**k do you think you're doing
you've p***ed me off for the last time
now i'm gonna make your life a lving h**l
so be ready to suffer the f*****g consequences

you broke me down
and you bled me
to the point of anger

now i'm gonna break you
and i'm gonna bleed you
to the point of satisfaction

you better f*****g go away
while you're still alive
you better f*****g go away
while you still have a chance

you better f*****g go away
before you p**s me off more
you better f*****g go away
before you get yourself killed

f**k you f**k you
f**k you f**k you

you better f*****g go away
while you're still alive
you better f*****g go away
while you still have a chance

you better f*****g go away
before you p**s me off more
you better f*****g go away
before you get yourself killed

f**k you f**k you
f**k you f**k you
f**k you f**k you
f**k you f**k you
#2
srry every1 in da last line of da 1st verse i meant 2 say:

because i'm not going to put up with any s**t
#3
NICE JOB.. SOMEHOW I GET THE FEELING OF GODSMACK'S THE ENEMY, WHATEVER , GREED or I ****ING HATE YOU.. either way its really good.. just write the notes and record an mp3 and ill buy it.. lol
#6
it's ok, too descriptive for me personally.
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#7
.......all i see in this is Godsmack......add in a "Yeah" dude
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo
#8
damn unless this guy is beating you or something, then I dont see a reason to be so incredibly infuriated with this person.

you seem extremely violent, and like ppl are saying about all your other stuff... they sound like just bad rip offs of Godsmack. Find your own style in writing. That way you stand out.
#9
Wow, serious anger management issues!

But yeah, all of your lyrics I've read are basically traced from Godsmack. I agree with the above poster (sorry, don't remember your name): Try to write as you instead of the bands you listen to.
#10
Wow, you were P I S S E D, dude! Good lyrics, though they are a little blunt, imo. I've never listened to Godsmack before, so I don't know if your lyrics are written in a similar style to their's, but definitely find your own writing style.
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