#1
I Will
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i will make you happy
i will make you suffer
i will get you through
i will break you down

i'm your soul
your flesh and blood
i will control you until the end

i will make you the best
i will make you the worst
i will let you live in peace
i will let you live in hell

i'm your soul
your flesh and blood
i will
i'm your soul
your flesh and blood
i will control you until the end

your life is in my hands
i have complete control
i take your thoughts
i take your life

i'm your soul
your flesh and blood
i will
i'm your soul
your flesh and blood
i will control you until the end

i'm your soul
your flesh and blood
i will
i'm your soul
your flesh and blood
i will control you until the end
#3
hmmmmmm
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#5
i thought some of my songs i wrote were bad until i read all of this kids stuff.
sorry but all your stuff is so cliche.. not saying some of my stuff is, but, almost everything has been done here before.. unless they are heavily instrumental(is that too big a word to understand because you didnt understand what cliche meant before) for the most part then you'll be fine.. otherwise, dont rely on the lyrics.