#2
cool song ^^
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#5
goddamn that was pretty sick... i think i would had made the chords a little quieter cuz they drowned out everything else in some places, and i think the solo should be closer toward the end, it felt like it was too soon and maybe a little short. otherwise amazing
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#6
I loved that. The harmonized leads were really cool, like in the solo and that one fill at bars 80 and 81. In the solo, maybe make the backing chords a little quieter, they tend to drown out the solo a bit. My favorite part of the whole piece is the part at letter D. Nice bluesy riff. Excellent lead work on the whole. Very nice.
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#7
The thing about the backing chords is that they didn't sound loud enough on my computer...maby I just have a bad sound system or something. The harmonies were pretty difficult to figure out in some parts...like with the blues device that uses the minor third as a leading tone for the major third, if you harmonize that in thirds you need to use the same harmony note, the perfect fifth, or else it sounds too dissonant.
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#9
I would if I could actually play the whole thing at that tempo ...I took a little compositional license by going beyond my own technical ability in some parts. I can pick eighth notes at that tempo but not quite triplets.
And for critting your song, no problem.
#10
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thats probably one of the best songs ever put on here, good work

I completely agree.
That was amazing.
I absolutely LOVED the lead work. And how you arranged everything was great.
I loved every little bit of this.
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#11
Quote by Spark1284
goddamn that was pretty sick... i think i would had made the chords a little quieter cuz they drowned out everything else in some places, and i think the solo should be closer toward the end, it felt like it was too soon and maybe a little short. otherwise amazing


i agree with the backing chords being too loud but other than that it was a pretty sick song.