#1
song was just written quickly......and has some of its parts from some of my other writing.......plz crit...


gasoline streamed puddles,
and unlit cigarettes
oil stained rainbows,
handfuls of regrets

these scattered love songs
on your hit and run path
broken words are all i can spit
kerosine is down, ready to be lit

see the burn marks in my skin
3rd degree upon my chest
before my one last sin
this is my final request....

let my burning body lie
cross my heart in hope to die
thread this needle through my eye
your hate i cant deny

i think of the keeper of the stars,
wonder if they see these scars
i cant sleep or dream
laying here awake and i scream...

let my burning body lie
cross my heart in hope to die
thread this needle through my eye
your hate i cant deny
(repeat)
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#2
Way too emo.
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#3
angry

buts that what your going for so thqst cool and all
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#4
emo...ok....
My Gear:
Washburn Lyon Tele Copy
ESP LTD MH250NT
Samick D7-CE :
Digitech Death Metal Pedal
Dunlop Jimi Hendrix Wah
Peavy Renown Solo Series Amp
#5
Any song with the word kerosine in it is bad news to me. Not even kidding I know of like 4.