... of this lyric I've been working on. It's not complete by any means and please keep in mind that I'm a novice at this. Thanks!

I used to be a dreamer,
I'm not anymore
When you left me you took all my hopes and dreams,
There's nothing left back here at all

I thought we had it good together,
That we were gonna be allright
But you said there's to much space between us,
Packed your bags and said goodbye