#1
This song is inspired by the amazing and powerful Diamanda Galas. I hope some of the influence seeps through. It's darker than I'm used to.

Eyes Tied Open

I force my blind as open as I dare to see,
but when I see the golden light, some sickness comes over me.
A misery of times recalled, and a foretelling of what?s ahead,
I lie back in my imaginary coffin and I pretend that I?m dead.

It?s pushed upon me to be so good, I try and try and try,
and every time I fail, lord, a piece of me dies.
If death is all what?s in store for me, I?ll get my practice then,
because they want me to be so good, let me be better than them.

My eyes have been tied open now, I?ve got to accept all I see,
though I?m more likely to vomit over everything that is free.
It?s possible to be destroyed in a single moments glance,
whether you?re trapped down in the fires of Hell or making love in France.

Poor, poor Jesus, it?s the end of the line I know,
does it make you cry to see that your black sheep finally go.
It?s goodbye from me now, and hello to him,
I sleep soon as an honest man, but I awake filled sin.
#2
I liked it good job. The title really caught my eye too, it sounds really cool hehe. There were a couple lines that didn't quite fit the beat but you've probably noticed that too, just a couple word changes is needed. Good job though.
ferret.
#3
I'm guessing you're referring to: "It?s possible to be destroyed in a single moments glance,
whether you?re trapped down in the fires of Hell or making love in France."

But I'm not sure which part to change, or whether I should change it at all!