#1
ok this is a repost of my song.... please crit....


Like that picture of me on your wall
The bonds slowly break
As both me and the picture fall

What the hell is wrong with me?
Never again will I have a girl like you,
A girl that makes me happy
Cause I messed it all up

And you cant stand
To give me one more chance
Our relationship was based on the truth
But the break up, based all on lies

It’s so damn crazy
That I'm too strong

To move on
But I’m way too weak
To keep you by my side

As the days go by
I miss you more and more
I see you with another guy
And ask myself “what am I fighting for?”

And you just cant stand
To give me one more chance
Our relationship was based on the truth
But the break up, based all on lies

Cause we tore it down
Tore it down
Tore it down
Tore it down
UG's HIPPIE
#2
Fun Fact: Tare, as spelt in the post name, refers to weighing something.

not bad, but quite cliche
Schecter C-1+
Fender FM212R
Boss MD-2
A shitload of other pedals I never use.


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#3
"Same old stuff different writter" syndrome.

Look don't say that you "fell" "are falling" "Have fallen" unless you mean to say you actualy fell down and got a boo boo.

Don't talk about how the reason you "broke your heart to pieces" was because of "how you lied to me though you said you were true"

And never use tore it down as a key phrase. Ever.