#1
Who's not blinded?

''An eye for an eye will make the whole World Blind''?

There's a man
Who's deaf and blind
Staring at the world
Planning his vengeance

In is room
He looks the sun
Going up, going down
Planning his revenge

But then the sun comes black
His world comes red
He can't think
He has only one solution

Tell me? who's not blinded?

''An eye for an eye will make the whole World Blind''
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Please telle me if you see spelling errors or grammatical errors. Thanks.
(This song is about the Dawson shooting tragedy, the polytechnic tragedy and the parlement tragedy, all of those happened in Québec, where I live)
#2
To be honest? It's short, but I realy enjoyed it. Seriously, with a bit of fine tuning changing some lyrics (I like my songs a little more wordy) I think this would be a great song.

P.S. Quoteing Gandhi is brilliant.