The intro is pretty much crap, but its gets pretty good near the end. Maybe if you worked on it a little more...
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Schecter C-1 Classic
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what do you use to record your stuff cuz it all snds pretty glossed over and gud quality
eh just my crap squier strat, Toneport ux1, and Mixcraft
but thanks for the crit zephyr
It sounds like its all over the place, and u just slapped 3 different guitar trax into 1minute. Try sorting it out a bit, and maybe make it a bit longer, and variate a little bit from the main riff.