#2
The intro is pretty much crap, but its gets pretty good near the end. Maybe if you worked on it a little more...
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#3
what do you use to record your stuff cuz it all snds pretty glossed over and gud quality
#4
eh just my crap squier strat, Toneport ux1, and Mixcraft
but thanks for the crit zephyr
#5
It sounds like its all over the place, and u just slapped 3 different guitar trax into 1minute. Try sorting it out a bit, and maybe make it a bit longer, and variate a little bit from the main riff.