Very friggen repetitive.
Change it up. Dont give us four bars of the same thing repeating 4 times.

Definately work on it.
Keep us posted.
Spiral Out
It has kind of a South Park theme vibe to it. It's kind of hard to criticize a riff when it's out of context. Add some other parts to it, a bass line or a drum line, maybe another guitar part, something extra.
what the heck?

so you basically wrote 1 measures worth of music and posted on here saying that you're still working on it.

i dont see a point in this at all.

wait till you finish a few riffs or something and slap them together first.

and that riff was really boring and repetitive. mostly boring because it was so repetitive