#1
mmhmmm i have no idea what im dong with this, i kinda just made it up on the spopt cause im bored.

i dont what
im still doin here
its always boring
theres rarely ever anything to do

if i could drive then
i would drive away
but i cant
i can walk though so ill run

always buying fancy strings
shiney nickel
looks like silver
wasting my money

there is this place i know
its wher i go
keeps me safe from all that
all you
if i could, then i think i would

tv has lost its appeal
computer justa waste
thats why im always on one
thats whyy im always watchin
#5
find it hard to write songs about boredom. i don't like the last bit,

it's quite good, i tv has lost its appeal
computer justa waste
thats why im always on one
thats whyy im always watchin

should either be cut or seriously reworked,. it lets the song down and isnt a good way to end it, in my opinion.

also, please edit it.. makes it a little easier to read.

all in all nice job.

crit this:https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=6844803

cheers