#1
i Just wrote a song, not finished yet, but you can get the idea from this sample. Decent hard rock song. I have lyrics written to suit this, but i couldnt be arsed typin em up. The songs called Stop Climatic Chaos.
Attachments:
Stop Climatic Chaos.zip
DARK_MATTER, Instrumental Post-Metal from Ireland


Bass:
Ibanez BTB 405QM
Ashdown PM600 - Peavey TVX 4x10
Russian Big Muff

Guitar:
Fender Jim Root sig
'99 Stagemaster 7-string
Yamaha F310
Hughes & Kettner Warp 7 w/4x12
#3
I liked it. A little repetative, yes, but I liked the main guitar riff. My least favorite part was the part where the crash cymbal was hitting all on the eighth notes That could be changed in my opinion, but you do what you want. Overall, nice.

Care to crit some of my stuff? Links are in my sig, and the newest stuff is at the bottom.
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