#3
The palm muted opens might get a little old, unless of course, there is some killer drum beat going on there. The verse was very, well for lack of a better description, Jewish-sounding. The solo is semi-spastic, between the leads and then the plam muted note switch off. But overall, pretty good for a first song.
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#4
It got very boring. To be brutally honest, the bridge was the best part. The dual guitar solo coulda been better. And... You dont have to use a K in the title!
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#5
Yeah...zzzzzzzzz is a fitting title for the file because it's pretty boring as is...and the solo is very choppy with very little flow. I would suggest adding a baseline that deviates from the rhythm guitar parts to make it a little more interesting, and trying to even out the solo a bit, and perhaps adding some harmony more interesting than unison or octave.
Last edited by poopikins at Sep 19, 2006,
#8
i will admit that the solo is crap because i did it in like 15 minutes. if some one could help me out on a solo that would be great.
#9
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It got very boring. To be brutally honest, the bridge was the best part. The dual guitar solo coulda been better. And... You dont have to use a K in the title!



Kronic Rebellion is the name of my band.
#10
Quote by poopikins
Yeah...zzzzzzzzz is a fitting title for the file because it's pretty boring as is...and the solo is very choppy with very little flow. I would suggest adding a baseline that deviates from the rhythm guitar parts to make it a little more interesting, and trying to even out the solo a bit, and perhaps adding some harmony more interesting than unison or octave.


i just named it zzzzzzzzz because i was tired and i didnt want to type out the name for it. My bassist is working on a bassline for it.
#11
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ok....... so no song name huh?
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"I AM metal"