#1
hello, I made a melow song with some death metal elements in it etc. Kinda weird. Excuse the guitar tone, its a solid state, couldnt use my tube. Let us know what u think.

Its called "Monument To Lies"

http://robjs.dmusic.com/
#2
Excellent.

I say turn down the vocals when they come in full blast... they drown out the guitar and it's sort of harsh.
#3
its good... its like if you took the clean guitar parts of an agalloch song and the verse sections of an amon amarth song and fit them together. works well.
#4
I think it would be cool if the guitar solo in the beginning had a distortion effect in it, but it would also give it less of a quiet, mysterious feeling.
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